Wednesday, August 1, 2007

The song I wrote... not Emma

Here is another song I made up. Emma didn't help me with this one. :D Maybe if she did it might have been better... oh well.

Only One Year Old

I was pulling out of my driveway one night and an accident happened,
I woke up and they told me that my baby was gone,

*Chorus*

She was only one year old,
Pulling out of that driveway,
I didn't see the car behind me,
She was in the back seat,
She was only one year old....

I wand home that night and I went into her room,
Toys scattered everywhere,
Tears running down my cheeks,

*Chorus*

She was only one year old,
Pulling out of that driveway,
I didn't see the car behind me,
She was in the back seat,
She was only one year old...

I went into my bedroom and I knelt upon my bed,
I said Lord help me,
Because I don't know what to do,

*Chorus*

She was only one year old,
Pulling out of that driveway,
I didn't see the car behind me,
She was in the back seat,
She was only one... year.... old...


It's pretty sad. I made it up when I was 9 years old. I haven't really made the rest up yet. If you have any ideas of how it should end pleas leave a comment and tell me!!! I didn't copy Jesus take the Wheel in any way. Ok, got to go:)
-Destiny
What do you think???!???!???

4 comments:

John said...

Only 9 years old? Wow. Yep, it's a sad song. Kinda like "Christmas Shoes". That song was written to tug at your heart strings. I think you ought to keep going and tell about what the girl liked to do. What funny quirks the girl had. After all, all girls have funny quirks! Maybe she could be 5 years old. Give you more to work with. I'm not very much help cause I suck at song writing. Keep at it. Develop your talent.

Destiny said...

Thanks’ Uncle John:) Maybe I'll post this song again after I mess with it a little bit and then you can see it:)
-Destiny

Kaila Anderson said...

Thats really good. I could tell it was a copy of "Jesus Take the Wheel."

Destiny said...

Kaila,
I made this up before "Jesus Takes The Wheel" was even out. I was only 9!!!
-destiny